Improvements from
Feedback:
For the feedback on my
production I am going to change:
Ø The sneeze of the teddy bear. This is due to how the
sneeze is not clearly presented and happens a little bit too fast.
Ø The close ups of the teddies. This is due to how
there are too many of them in which takes up some of my 10 second time.
Ø The tea cups tipping over. This is due to how the
cups falling over are not extremely clear to the audience’s eye.
Ø The E4 logo. This is due to how it was brought up
that it was too patchy and needed to be a little bit clearer.
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